Sunderland-Final
6/9/2010 06:43:35 am

Nice job, guys. Your argument is pretty straight forward and clearly expressed. However, it tends to feel more reportlike than an argument. This is largely the result of weak connection to theme. Your project connects to theme very well in a broad sense but you don't follow through on that connection to really focus. Organization and navigation is clear though it does tend to be very texty. Images sometimes are good (diagram of government) but other times are feel thrown in for the sake of having a visual (Books). Nonetheless, you do a solid job.

88/100

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Girl
3/18/2014 06:31:47 am

Who were the anti-federalists?

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